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'A good story should surprise you as it unfolds. Then afterwards it should seem the story could only have unfolded that way.’ Ken Loach

I let your arms mould me

December 17th 2007 10:02
I let your arms mould me
I felt safe inside them.

I wanted to stay
And never move.

Soon they slipped
I was framed by leaving hands

I tried to grab you
You were too far away

You moved too quickly
Why didn’t you stop?

I called,
Didn’t you hear me?

I wish I could've reached you
Now I know I can't.

You're gone
But still here with me

Your soul
Your words

I can feel you
I can hear you

Don't stop
Wrap them around me again


As I wished you had done one more time when you were here
But somehow I can still feel them.



Inspired by Lily's post: Really Long Link Thank-you.

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Comment by katyzzz

December 17th 2007 11:00
Tracy, I just love the pic, I'll have to watch myself.

katyzzz

Comment by What's Your Story?

December 17th 2007 12:06
Oh wow, that was absolutely moving. And heartbreaking.

Comment by Michaelie

December 17th 2007 13:02
I saw the first version of this before you extended it - this is really good, and as Toni says: heartbreaking.

Michaelie

Comment by tlcorbin

December 17th 2007 14:48
Tracy, I'm going to go throw myself off a carpet edge and should I survive, I'll call every woman I ever dated and apologize....just in case. Raven

Comment by Tracy

December 17th 2007 22:16
Hello WYS,

I appreciate your feedback, thank-you. Always good to see you.

Tracy


Comment by Tracy

December 17th 2007 22:17
Hi katyzzz

As you know, I love mandalas and similar art (which is why I enjoy yours so much).

Thanks for popping in,

Tracy

Comment by Tracy

December 17th 2007 22:19
Hi Michaelie

I'm touched that you remembered it from the first time.

Thank-you for your thoughts and for popping in,

Tracy



Comment by Tracy

December 17th 2007 22:21
Hello Raven

He he, I don't think you need to be so hard on yourself!

Thanks for popping in,

Tracy

Comment by Patricia

December 18th 2007 02:02
Tracy,

Like the others said, this was really touching.

Patricia

Comment by Tracy

December 18th 2007 06:51
Hello Patricia

Thank-you for popping in and for your comment, it's much appreciated.

Tracy

Comment by Lilla

December 22nd 2007 22:20
Tracy,

Beautiful imagery,
wonderful words,
haunting melodies...

What a lovely thing to wake up to this morning...

Lilla ...

Comment by Tracy

January 2nd 2008 05:34
Thank-you, Lilla, your words mean a lot to me,

Tracy

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